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it is possible, all you have to do is take out some of those pink things with the top rotor blade and fly across

much better than some helicopter games but it still needs much improvement
YAY i made inspiration!
better than before however the difference in strength from front to back suspension is WAY off. the front flex is about 2.5-3 times more than the back
the visuals are better and the horrible test thing is gone, so that is a plus
fix the suspension problems and i will give it a 9.5/10
it is ok
i say ok mainly because some colors and shadings dont correlate and some colors are just plain off.
consittering, some details are very nice but the whole car isnt shaded so the details look out of place
needs work
then it gets a better rating
(i didnt rate it yet)
Last edited at 2010/02/04 22:45:02 by sheepborg
interesting, however it is impractical for it to be used mostly because of the size
i love it though :tup:
good but it could easily be much better than it is right now

as for the style of building you are using it is relatively limited to the color combos you can achieve. for a wider range of colors you would instead go for a design that has the body all one color with transparent white and black peices on top then make it breakable. hen all you wouls need is a selection of color blocks that could be much wider in range (plus easier custom colors)

the suspension is pretty bad. it goes down farther than the car is tall :x
also the front wheel collides with the front panel and the back wheel goes in front of the car

the wheels are definitly not pretty either (did you look at my rim tutorial?)

you need filler objects behind the wheel so the car isnt see-though

besides that it is a great scene, but a track would also be nice

if you have any questions please ask
keep up the good work (except make it better)
the batteries dont effect the light at all
(i wont rate though)
Last edited at 2010/02/05 02:53:01 by sheepborg
this is awesome! with a few impovements as far as durrability and som asthetics this is a 10/10 for now it is an 8.5769
sounds to me like somebody had too much to drink *cough* no offence

[joe talking about trophy's truck]:
"this is one of my best vehicules" & "i love this version too"[other version?] & "4wd suspension" [spelled out four wheel drive suspension]

emphasis on "my"

now where is that smily that gulps down a beer when you need it...
i got one to go 450 meters in phun (npt uploaded)
after better shadings that are transparent light and dark rather than just body panels then it will need to not have borders

my pantera looks terrible if you draw borders on it.. anything with transparent shadings on it would look terrible
so you should work on it yourself so YOU can improve.
*comment edited for pointless info*
Last edited at 2010/02/07 02:43:38 by sheepborg
disregard everything in there except for the do it yourself part :tup:
btw: did you read my comment on how to fix the suspensions on the old version?
Last edited at 2010/02/07 02:42:21 by sheepborg
i am unable to get it up the ramp :(
it apears that you forgot to factor in the sun
this is true, it is a whole lot better than most first uploads!
Most people post the first thing they ever made, cool people post the first good thing they ever made
if i posted my first thing i would laugh at myself
anyways, yes this is a great first upload
awesome!
but it is a little bit annoying because of how time consumming it is to take a good shot
uh... you forgot to color no less than nine different pieces....
you also included some ground onto the tires
and some sections where you were emulating reflections, such as on the back below/behind the spoiler, got really garbled looking instead of looking like reflections
you also made the lighting effects on the spoiler too bright, remember (i beileve) that is supposed to be matte
some thin pieces were made too big so they chunked up
the thing that is suposed to be the antena holder with the antena screwed out you dipicted funny and doesnt look like it should

despite these flaws it is amazing! and much beond my ability (i could perhaps make it, but not as well and it would be a several month ordeal)

i still have to give a 10/10 because it is awesome
i just like finding flaws, i am a critic i cant help it
the adding of the sun would require more work, but you may find it worth it

BTW i am 14 and i can make cool stuff (check out my ktm 990 superduke)
so you can if you want to :tup:
wow, this is much better than your other cars!!!

the only problems are all related to the wheels,tires, and suspensions
to fix this car you need to:
1 make the body collide with group B (everything but the suspension arms and the wheels should collide with B)
2 instead of covering up the flame edges, cut them off
3 send all of the black parts behind the body and the suspensions to back
4 select only the body and move it to the front (everything but the wheels and the suspension and the black parts)
5 get rid of the little rectangles on the wheels
6 make the spring strength back to 1
7 select the suspension arm for the back wheel and make its density 6.5 or so
8 select the suspension arm for the front and make its density about 4.7
9 make all of the springs dampings 1
10 if you have to make the springs a little longer

**and ajust the boxes and such to collide with B** very important

now that you did this the wheels go in front of the black but behind the body
and the suspension will be really smooth

keep up the good work:tup:
:) no borders!
Last edited at 2010/02/07 18:08:18 by sheepborg
no xfire for me, i only email and phun

besides you can still see your own deleted scene
it should still be there on your page, visible only to you
no need for the scripting
they actually just have something that spins and has a bar connected to the wiper
kinda like this:
. . . /
O__/
. . /

the O spins and moves the / back and forth. they are connected by the __
:) very good
unfortunately i dont have algodoo so it doesnt work the same as it should, but i will assume that it is awesome

i will assume that when the moon and the sun are on opposite sides then the tides near each will be the highest, like it should be

keep up the good work
clever, but obviously it is different than most attempts at a mono-wheel vehicle
rather than having the seat connected to the drive thing like on most of these, this has the drive going to the wheel. then there is a cab sstuck on dead center
correct?
it says detailed not mechanical or whatever
hey you are back!
where did you go?
have you seen any of my stuff since you seemingly disappeared?
Last edited at 2010/02/07 20:59:08 by sheepborg
did you actually make the bomb thing?
real wipers use a motor going in one direction constantly
they do not use motor direction swiching
oh oh i see the one that isnt working right is working right
it is supposed to clean the corners of the windsheild, i see
the problem is i couldnt tell what it was supposed to do because it isnt quite working right
well...
your first set of cars was.... kinda not the best

plus no borders on this which is good
could be better.
needs to be shaded
the suspension is better but the wheels still collide with the body (this is bad)
i am not a fan of the tracers from the lights
borders are back :(
all around it is pretty good
it is about 8.4 worthy

I just have to say: the emblem is A M A Z I N G!!!!
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