Wew, nice cannon you got there. It's pretty cool actually, if the auto-loading system you were talking about has been made it would be much cooler! Let the good ideas afloat!
Naughty aliens get their Hyperbaric Tritium-Argon Photonic Antimatter bombs obliterated by missile defense rockets shot by a modern multi-megawatt Cesium-137 RADAR system.
Reading this was like a train hitting my neck. No harsh though!
Golden, it's golden. But I hope there's more interesting scenes rather than marble races (I'm not criticizing marble race scenes, I just don't like the fact that they're overrated.)